downward
into the space
where we hope never to go
we see others there
we pray
we hold out our hands
and pull them out
we help them stay away from the edge
we don't go too close
for we may fall into the abyss
but when no one's looking
we stray
we slip
we slide
we spiral downward
into the space
where we hoped never to go
why?
because we've lost our focus
we don't see the helping hand
we see the abyss
and it calls to us
to fall
to spiral
downward
into the space
where we hoped never to go
at last we get the strength
to reach for help
to search for a way
upward
up out of the space
where we hoped never to go
we take the hand that's offered
we clamor
we struggle
we climb
we somehow allow ourselves
to be helped
upward
up out of the space
where we hoped never to go
9 comments:
i just love this- bring to work material. thank you!!!
God has been my strength when i have felt as though i was holding on to the very last thread...beautiful words written here....
blessings,
donna
yes Dawna, I authored this.
...just where I was - in the moment...
...knowing that God is my strength when I'm weak.
I love this, I can really feel the words you wrote. Everyone has felt the edge and the spiral, and then that hand reaches out and pulls us back up. Powerful writing sister girlfriend.
Tell me, are you musical? A triple threat? You are artistic, poetic...thanks for sharing. I love visiting your blog to see what creative talents you will show next.
Wonderful poem!
you drew these? wowwwwwww.
the ice cream in cone is a showstopper. :D
This is beautiful... Thank you for sharing.
This was a part of who I was a week or so ago...thankfully God is always there. Beautifu poem!
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